Sunday, 29 June 2014

Max

Today Max the rabbit came to school.  He was eating a carrot. Max was fluffy and he looked funny with big eyes.  Max looked happy eating the carrot.  Max the rabbit lives in the hutch.  I liked meeting Max because he was fun to play with.

By Sophie


Awesome Max

Today we meet Max the rabbit at school.  He can eat very fast.  He has brown fur, a tiny tail and long ears.  Max likes lying in the sun.  Max said, “Where is my carrot?”  I felt very happy meeting Max.

By Kelly

Smooth Cool Rabbit

Today Max the rabbit came to visit us at school.  Max scoffed up the orange carrot in less than a minute.  Max likes the sun and he like to run on the green grass.   Dylan brings him inside so he keeps warm.  Max has hard pellets to eat.  Max made me happy because I saw him eat the carrot so fast!

By Lucas

Fluffy Max

Today Max the rabbit came to school.  Max eats orange carrots and he eats long grass and hard pellets.  I love Max the rabbit.  Max was scared.  His ears were down.  At home he poos in the corner of his hutch.  He has a little bed in the tiny house.  My rabbit came to Room 9.  I was happy because he came to see the Writer’s group.

By Alaska




Max the Rabbit

On Thursday we meet Max in Room 9.  Max ate two carrots and apples.  He is very soft on his floppy ears.  He is only a bit fluffy.  Max likes to chomp food until he is full.  We had to be careful because if we showed him our fingers he might bite us.  I was pleased that Max came because I love animals.

By Nick

Eli Meets Max

On Thursday I met Max.  Max is a friendly rabbit.  He is very fluffy because he’s fat! He likes carrots and he eats them very fast. He also likes to eat apples.  It was so fantastic meeting Max because I liked to watch him find the missing carrot.  Max jumped around Room 9.  He made me feel very happy. 

By Eli